Blog 5 - Peer Review (Nadzri's WA2)

Your essay is quite interesting and informative with a discussion about Very High Temperature Reactor (VHTR), which can be used to replace fossil fuels. Because of a clear thesis statement, I can easily recognize your main points in this essay.
In body paragraphs, there are many relevant and logical reasons used to support your ideas and most of them are logical. These supporting information are very useful; thank to them, I knew more about the positive advantages of VHTR. However, I did not recognize any counterclaim and rebuttal in your essay. So, you should use some counterclaim to strengthen your points of view and persuade readers. In addition, you also should use more transitional words to link all ideas smoothly so that your essay will be clearer. You also did not use any citation. Some citation quoted from articles of famous journals or researchers may make your essay become more persuasive.
Generally, thank to this essay, I knew more about nuclear reactor and this is an useful information. Your writing is quite interesting and if you fix some small mistakes, it could be a good essay.

Blog 4: Summary of "Climate of compromise"

Before Copenhagen summit begin, there are many different perspectives about the success of this conference. Copenhagen summit have partially attained some successes because many countries promise to cut a remarkable amount of emissions and they have already started to consider seriously their own emissions. To encounter the climate change, all nations have to reduce their emissions in a long term. Developed countries must accept to decrease the amount of emission substantially while developing ones must control their greenhouse gases. Moreover, developing countries also have to improve their technology with the help of developed countries. Another trouble which developing countries definitely face is financial concern. An international fund is a solution for this problem and funds should be distributed smoothly and effectively to countries in need. There are a lot of things for countries to do and it is impossible to solve all at a time, but leaders can make strong actions based on national ability. All countries have to be patient to solve this global problem.