Post no. 2 - Peer Review (Nadzri's WA1)

Your essay is quite brief and straightforward. From this, I have known generally about the important roles of ecosystems in combating climate change.
Your introduction is clear enough to recognize the thesis statement. You focus on how natural ecosystem save lives and livelihoods as well as its benefit to the nature and human.
You also have used many references to develop and support your ideas. However, although your supporting ideas is quite clear and easy to follow, you also need to provide more information for each aspect you emphasized so that readers can imagine it efficiently. For example, in the forth paragraph, you should show how the developing countries can benefit from the REDD.
Moreover, although your essay is quite brief and easy to follow, you should use more transition words so that you essay will be more smooth. For instance, also in forth paragraph. , you want to discuss about the benefit of natural ecosystems which you have reminded in the thesis statement but idea is so general. You need to provide more specific benefits of natural ecosystems.
Lastly, You have summarized well all of your main points in the conclusion. However, at the end of your essays, there are no references which should be listed again for the correction purpose.
In general, your essay is logical and good enough to provide a general picture about the vital roles of natural ecosystems and it's really useful for me to broaden my knowledge about the relationship of natural ecosystems and climate change.